Tuesday, November 25, 2008
Exercise 5.1
Wednesday, November 12, 2008
Exercise 4.3
There are many issues with people today concerning Capital punishment. There are two sides of Capital Punishment you are either for or against. My paper will be telling you the history of Capital Punishment, where it started and why it started. I will also be telling you why i am against Capital Punishment and why it is inhumane. It will look at what happened in the past and what is happening today.
Beginning/Lead 2
One of many concerns when it comes to the death penalty is if he or she is guilty or innocent. There have been cases where a man was on death row and he was innocent. Sometimes there is not enought witnesses or enough information so prove someones innocence. Thats another reason why alot of people are against the death penalty.
Beginning/Lead 3
Capital Punishment is completely inhumane. People are trying to play Gods part and we cannot do that. We do not have the power on who should live and who should die. That is murder, and we are committing our own crimes, where is the justice in that?
Thursday, November 6, 2008
Time Management
A Topical Outline
Body Paragraph
I. Intoducing the Death Penalty and what it is.
Body Paragraphy
II. Talking about why it is wrong, and how we need to ablolish it.
Will add more later having thinking problems on what is next in my paper
Audience
Personal vs. more third person
In Class Self-assessment
2. With all of my sources i have about 5 to 6 pages with my paper, my sources are pretty long and have a lot of information in them.
3. I could answer about any question that has to do with my paper, i have done a lot of reseach and i feel very prepared with what i know.
4. I would say that i am ready to write considering my paper is done, i am just revising it for any errors i have made and just adding a few more details. I have about a page to go so it is going pretty well.
Wednesday, November 5, 2008
exercise 4.2
To many people the death penalty is a serious matter and alot of people do not agree with it. Many people say its not our place to say its Gods. I have no problem with the death penalty i think every state should have it. iF you have the guts to do the crime then you should have to deal with the consequences. I first wanted to write on how i approved the death penalty but the more i began to think the more i realized i wanted to write on how i do not approve the death penalty, think about it why not put yourself if the other point of view, i considered it as a challenge and i took it.
Step 4
Moments
Stories
People
Scenes
Im not saying that every crime comitted is worth being killed over, but crimes such as rape or murder, then they deserve to die, but since im writing about the other point of view its harder for me when the part comes for my on opinoin. I do believe that God is the one who decides who lives and who doesnt and it is very inhumane to kill someone that is not Gods wish.
Step 5
Do you believe in Capital Punishment?
Me: No i dont i think it is completly inhumane and should be abolihsed from every state that has it. I believe it is up to God on who lives and who dies. We cannot play Gods part and with Capital Punishment thats what we are trying to do we are trying to play God.
Friend: I do believe in the Death Penalty i believe if you do the crime to do the time. Not every crime that is done should the persone be killed, i think there should be certain crimes that the death penalty pertains to such as rape for murder, i dont think stealing a car or bashing mailboxes is bad enough to die over.
Step 6.
" So What? "
If there is one thing i want people to learn is that we cannot Be God and no one ever will be so we need to stop trying and the man do his job.
Monday, October 27, 2008
Paper Proposal (New)
Paper Proposal
English 102
October 27, 2008
My paper will be about the death penalty, where it came about and why we use it today. I am against the death penalty, because it is wrong and inhumane, i feel like people are trying to play the role of God and that is not our role to play. I feel that God is the only one who should decide on who lives and who dies. My paper will show statistics on how many people die and year in each state. My paper will also be about just my opinoin on the whole topic.
Thursday, October 23, 2008
4 Sources
Source:Robinson,B.A. "Capital Punishment Part 1:Data and Trends." Ontario Consultants and Religious Tolerance 27 October 2008
Layer 1: Story the Source
The article begins with how many people were killed in colonial times then gradually goes into how many people are killed yearly now due to the death sentence. Robinson then goes into which states dropped the death penalty and which ones still use the death penalty today. He then talks about how texas holds the hightest rate for capital punishment. He then goes into how the percentages of gender and race that are killed annually.
Layer 2: Rapid Summary
Baiscally this article is about the beginning of death penalty and how we use it today. There are statistics in this article and it mentions the states which offer the death penalty and which states do not.
Layer 3: Narrative of Thought
I learned so much from this article I thought I knew alot about the death penalty but after this article I was very unknowledged. I did not know how many states do now offer the death penalty I was surprised. I was very impressed with this article.
Focusing Question: Cons Against Capital Punishment
Source:B., Phil "Phil for Humanity." Phil for Humanity. 27 October 2008.
Layer 1: Story the Source
This article has the pro's and con's of capital punishment. It goes into great detail on the con's of capital punishment. It has all the reason's from it is inmoral to we the people are playing god.
Layer 2: Rapid Summary
The article has the reason to install capital punishment with the price to keep a person in jail vs the death penalty. Also how that capital punsihment can deter crimes rates. It then shows the con's of capital punshiment with how we are playing god as well as it is not humane and that it will have hardships on both sides of the families.
Layer 3: Narritive of Thought
I learned both sides of capital punishment. The pro's were reliable but not enough to support my decision on being for capital punishment. I think that the information for being aganist capital punishment will help me greatly inform my audience.
Focusing Question: Can Capital Punishment Be humane.
Source:no author cited 27 October 2008
Layer 1: Story the Source
This article has all the ways that we use to kill a person.
Layer 2: Rapid Summary
This article has all the ways that inhumane for the death penalty. It goes into detail how each different form is used. It tells you about lethal injection, shooting, gas chamber, and electrocution.
Lay 3: Narritive of Thought
I learned a lot more about all the different ways we have used in the past. I liked how each subject like the gas chamber and the leathal injection how it went into detail on how humane or inhumane it is.
Wednesday, October 15, 2008
Exercise 2.2
Metasearch Engines for Capital Punishment
Metacrawler (www.metacrawler.com)
Flexfinder (www.flexfinder.com)
FindSpot (www.findspot.com)
Working Bibliography
"The Death Penalty."Crime Magazine. January 99.15 October 2008<www.crimemagazine.com/cp101.htm..> Aritcle reviews the historty on capital punishment and why it is one the biggest debates in the U.S.
Green, Melissa. "History of Death Penalty and Recent Devolpments."Justice Center, University of Alaska Anchorage. 1999-2005. 15 October< href="http://justice.uaa.alaska.edu/death/history.html">http://justice.uaa.alaska.edu/death/history.html>. Aricle reviews history and statistics of Death Penalty.
Cauthen, Kenneth. "Capital Punishment." University Press of America. 1997. 15 October 2008<http://www.frontiernet.net/~kenc/cappun.htm> Article Reviews the justice and the nature of Moral Community.
Step 2
Hotbot www.hotbot.com
http://www.ojp.usdoj.gov/bjs/cp.htm
AltaVista www.altavista.com
http://www.religioustolerance.org/executj.htm
Thursday, October 9, 2008
Working Bibliography
Found at SILnet
The crisis in Darfur : a new front in Sudan's bloody war ; and condemning the government of the Republic of the Sudan for its attacks against innocent civilians in the impoverished Darfur Region of Western Sudan : hearing and markup before the Committee on International Relations, House of Representatives, One Hundred Eighth Congress, second session, on H. Con. Res. 403, May 6, 2004.
by United States. Congress. House. Committee on International Relations.
U.S. G.P.O. : For sale by the Supt. of Docs., U.S. G.P.O., 2004.
Darfur Peace and Accountability Act of 2006 : report (to accompany H.R. 3127).
by United States. Congress. House. Committee on International Relations.
U.S. G.P.O., 2006-
The devil came on horseback : bearing witness to the genocide in Darfur
by Steidle, Brian.
Public Affairs, c2007.
Darfur : a short history of a long war
by Flint, Julie.
Zed Books ; David Philip ; In association with International African Institute ; Distributed in the USA exclusively by Palgrave Macmillan, 2005.
Darfur : a "Plan B" to stop genocide? : hearing before the Committee on Foreign Relations, United States Senate, One Hundred Tenth Congress, first session, April 11, 2007.
by United States. Congress. Senate. Committee on Foreign Relations.
U.S. G.P.O. : For sale by the Supt. of Docs., U.S. G.P.O., 2008.
Book Search Keywords "Darfur"
Found at I-Share
Author:
Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations.
Title:
Land and water resources survey in the Jebel Marra area: the Sudan; final report; report prepared for the Government of the Sudan by the Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations acting as executing agency for the United Nations Development Programme.
Published:
Rome, Food and Agriculture Orgnaization of the United Nations; London, H.M.S.O., 1968.
Physical Description:
1 v. illus., maps (some col.), (incl. 3 fold. in pocket) 29 cm.
Subject (LCSH):
Natural resources --Sudan --Darfur.
Darfur (Sudan) --Economic conditions.
Other Name:
United Nations Development Programme.
Sudan.
Notes:
"FAO/SF:48/SUD-17."
One book (ix, 70 p.) and 3 fold. col. maps in box.
ISBN:
0119402211
Other Identifying Number:
B70-23781
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Northern Illinois UniversitySouthern Illinois University CarbondaleSouthern Illinois University EdwardsvilleUniversity of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign
Author:
United States. Congress. House. Committee on International Relations.
Title:
The crisis in Darfur [electronic resource] : a new front in Sudan’s bloody war ; and condemning the government of the Republic of the Sudan for its attacks against innocent civilians in the impoverished Darfur Region of Western Sudan : hearing and markup before the Committee on International Relations, House of Representatives, One Hundred Eighth Congress, second session, on H. Con. Res. 403, May 6, 2004.
Published:
Washington : U.S. G.P.O. : For sale by the Supt. of Docs., U.S. G.P.O., 2004.
Physical Description:
iii, 75 p. : ill., map ; 24 cm.
Subject (LCSH):
Atrocities --Sudan --Darfur Region.
Crimes against humanity --Sudan --Darfur Region.
Human rights --Sudan.
Sudan --Politics and government --1985-
Additional Availability:
552-070-31713-9 GPO
Notes:
Distributed to some depository libraries in microfiche.
Shipping list no.: 2004-0261-P.
"Serial no. 108-122."
Also available via Internet from the Committee web site. Address as of 9/7/04: http://wwwc.house.gov/international%5Frelations/108/93529.pdf; current access is available via PURL.
ISBN:
9780160734458
0160734452
Other Identifying Number:
Serial no. 108-122 (United States. Congress. House. Committee on International Relations)
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Book Search Keywords "Darfur"
Lewis and Clark Library System
Author
Daly, M. W.
Title
Darfur's sorrow : a history of destruction and genocide / M.W. Daly.
Publication Info.
Cambridge ; New York : Cambridge University Press, c2007.
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OPAC Message
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962.7 DAL
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BK, SOFTCOVER
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962.404 DAL
AVAILABLE
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Description
xix, 368 p. : ill., maps ; 23 cm.
Bibliography
Includes bibliographical references (p. 323-355) and index.
Contents
[Table of contents] -- List of figures -- Acknowledgments -- Chronology of events -- Maps -- The "abode of the blacks" -- Lords of mountain and savanna: the origins and history of the Fur State to 1874 -- The ends of the Turkish world -- Darfur at the end of time: the Mahdiyya, 1885-1898 -- Between an anvil and a hammer: the reign of Ali Dinar, 1898-1916 -- "Closed district": Anglo-Egyptian colonial rule in Darfur, 1916-1939 -- Unequal struggles, 1939-1955 -- Colonial legacies and Sudanese rule, 1956-1969 -- Darfur and "the May Regime", 1969-1985 -- Third time unlucky: Darfur and the restoration of parliamentary rule -- The State of Jihad -- The destruction of Darfur.
Subject
Sudan -- History -- Darfur Conflict, 2003-
Darfur (Sudan) -- Ethnic relations.
Darfur (Sudan) -- History.
Genocide -- Sudan -- Darfur.
ISBN
9780521876186 (hardback)
0521876184 (hardback)
9780521699624 (pbk.)
0521699622 (pbk.)
Monday, September 29, 2008
Excercise 1.8
2. I think John Yount choose this as the opening to pull his reader's into the book. It was a strong opening and catch's a person's eye. The theme I think it show's a the hardship the character goes through when jumping into the water and how his friends watch him go through so much pain to get away from the snakes that were going to slowly kill him. I think this show's that the book is going to be a central theme to hardship and bad luck.
3. The article is about a person's identity and how it is formed. This article gives you examples on what individuals do and do not do to get their identity. They talk about Erikson theory and then show a new theory to may or may not support his theory.
4. Yes my approach to the two selections were different. I read the first article without a problem and actually want to find this book to read it caught my attention. The second article I had to re-read twice to understand what they were saying. I was more interested in the first article than the second.
I really do not have any reading stragies I just read things that I am interested in.
I do re-read things when I feel confused or need to get a better outlook on the subject. I do highlight when I am looking for alot of information in one area. I think if I was reading for pleasure I would not worry about re-reading or highlighting. If this was an assignmet I would re-read and highlight so I get a better understanding.
I really did not look into these article's more after I read them in our book. So I cant say that I used my own advice on this assignment.
The most important thing about reading for a research paper is to get a better knowledge of the topic.
The key differences between the two was that the first article for pleasure and the second article was to inform a group of people.
I did not run into any problems with the first article. The second article I had to re-read because there was alot of information to take in to get the full meaning of the article.
Excercise 1.7
Primary Purpose: What is the United States doing to help?
What is their own Country doing to help?
What is the main cause for this war?
Argue: My thesis would be to inform the people about Darfur and what's being and not being done about it.
Analyze: My theory is what happened for this war to escalate to such great extremes.
A friend did a speech on Darfur and I have been glued to the subject ever since. I do not have any other prior beliefs or assumptions I just want to inform others.
Exercise 1.5
- Why is this happening?
- How did it start?
- Who is involved?
- What is happening?
- What is the government doing to come up with a solution?
Monday, September 22, 2008
Steps 1,2,and3
Step 1
- Hobbies
- snowboarding
- collecting coins from states
- why people collect post cards
Jobs
- Lawyer
- Nurse
- Teacher
- Actor
- Singer
- Comdedian
- Bus Driver
- Pastor
- Construction Worker
- Military Service
Habits
- Chewing Nails
- Smoking
- Drinking
- Binge Eating
- Texting and Driving
- Leaving the toliet seat up
- Doodling
- Pen Tapping
Step 2
Nursing is something that seems promising to me. Yes this subject does raise questions since this is the degree that I am going for. More research on this topic will help me answer questions now and in the long run with other questions that may come up. One question that I think is particualry interesting is does every nurse have to go through the long hours in a hospital to gian rank or more resposibilities. Yes this what I have always wondered about. Yes because I do not want to spend 12 hours a day and not have a life outside of work. The knowledge I would like to gain from this is how to still do my job but not work the long hours.
Step 3
Will I have to work with needles all the time?
Will I have to see people die?
Will I have to deal with people who are missing limbs?
Will I have to deal with sick children?
Will I have to be a nurse for a family member?
What are the days/nights that have more accidents than other days?
Do you really became one big family at your work place?
Thursday, August 28, 2008
Steps 1 and 2
English 102
Step 1
It is ok to say things the instructor might disagree with.
You can use you own experiences and observations as evidence.
You are supposed to use your own opinions.
You are always supposed to make an argument.
You need to follow a formal structure.
I agree with all of the above statements. I really believe you should use your own opinions and experiences as evidence, it shows that you do know what you are talking about. Students would of course pick the one where its ok to say things that the instructor might disagree with, they want to challenge the teacher, the want to be able to express themselves if even it means the teacher gets a little upset.
Step 2
There is a big difference between facts and statements.
Facts and statements that can be proven true, where as opinions are your own personal beliefs. They are what you believe about something. If people thought fact and opinions were true we would have facts as grass is blue and pigs can fly. You would not be able to trust anything anyone says. People would be telling nothing but lies everything with science would or could be changed and nothing would make since. The world would be very different, that is why facts are facts and opinions are opinions.